|Posted: October 7, 2011, 5:21 pm - IP Logged|
Hi everyone. I just want to tell everyone that when the Mega Millions Jackpot rolled, it went from the starting jackpot of $12 million to $14 million. The Mega Millions Jackpot rise only $2 million because it's the cash option value of this current jackpot. What do you think about my comment?
What do you think about my comment?
You should have used the past tense of "rise" which would be "rose".
Some would use a comma after "Hi" but that can be personal preference depending on your own diction and tempo.
Outside of that everything seems to be in order - everything spelled and punctuated properly.
Not perfect but better than a poke in the eye with a sharp stick, as they say.
"The only thing necessary for evil to triumph is for good men to do nothing"