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Well i thought id put some songs on here and let people read/review them

We're so dramatic

Lets stop this we've had it

This fighting is killing me

It's killing me

And here I am (here I am)

Armed with an apology

This one's worth hearing

 

Forever means forever

And if we die then its together

Nothing else even matters

As long as we end up together

And if you feel us fading

Lock me tight inside my car

And drive it off a bridge

And your lipstick through my heart

 

This is so tragic

Your crying, our manic

Behavior is killing me

It's killing me

And promise me (promise me)

You wont write our eulogy

I'd never read it

 

Forever means forever

And if we die then it's together

Nothing else even matters

As long as we end up together

And if you feel us fading

Lock me tight inside my car

And drive it off a bridge

And your lipstick through my heart

 

Every minute that we waste

Fighting is in bad taste

I want to share with you

Everything I ever do

And if there is a heaven

I pray that we both get in

So we can be together

Just like this but.......

 

Forever means forever

And if we die then it's together

Nothing else even matters

As long as we end up together

And if you feel us fading

Lock me tight inside my car

And drive it off a bridge

And your lipstick through my heart

 

 

Thats my first one, any comments?

Thanks, justin

Entry #3

Comments

Avatar hypersoniq -
#1
Interesting...
It's like a love story of a possessive psychopath.
No offense meant, it has worked quite successfully in the past
E.G.
"Every Breath You Take" by the Police,
"Two Steps Behind" by Def Leppard
and less subtly in
"My Bloody Valentine" by Good Charlotte

On the surface a seemingly angst-ridden love song but on careful reading the psychotic part is evident... It sounds more like a Husband/Wife song than a Boyfriend/Girlfriend song. A unique unfilled niche in many genres.
What type of music would this have?
My guess at reading it is emo, but you're the writer :-)

Only thing that is puzzling is the line "And your lipstick through my heart" I don't get that one... what's the idea with that line?
Avatar Justin -
#2
hypersoniq, you are right, it is kinda emo
I sing/play guitar in a band
Okay the lipstick through my heart is kinda like hard to explain lol.
Its saying drive the car off the bridge, drive your lipstick through my heart, its kind of like a way of saying if you want to kiss someone else then.........

thanks for the review im gonna post a few more different types of songs so keep lookin

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