The video was not long enough (moved along to fast) and the narrative was not descriptive enough to get the full benefits of their theory of controlled lighting.
What I did get was control of lighting was taken out of the hands of the utility which could fall into unsavory hands.

All I got was video not available.

I tried it again, my computer wouldn't pull it up, the little wheel thingy just spins

Sorry about that. I wish you could have viewed it.

I did the voiceover for this marketing tool. I was hoping to get honest feedback from many LP members. I am trying to get into voiceover work and this was my first opportunity. People tell me they liked what they heard but I am not so sure. I hate the sound of my own voice and need some outside opinions.

Hopefully others will see and hear the video and respond.

Your voice is deep which to me draws attention to what is being said. I think the clarity in your voice could be improved with practice. What I mean by that is to me some words weren't as clear, although I understood what you were saying. Not sure I can explain it better.
All in all, your voice is good and in my opinion you can do well in this type of work.
Good luck!

Hi GASMETERGUY, just finding your video now. For some reason I always have trouble with vimeo videos. A slow internet connection is not great for High Quality vids. Anyway I think your voice is superb with great depth and sincerity!. There are many online agencies looking for good voices - they act as middlemen. It should also be possible to work from home with some basic knowledge/equipment. Have a Google around. Another work source are video producers looking for good voices for many types of online business videos. Best of luck!